2nd DNF I’ve had in a lifetime. I’m all for self-publishing, but the grammar issues in this novel just overwhelm what could have been something fun. Also, for being written by an American ABOUT American culture, replacing words with the British terms really took a lot out of it. It was hard to “relate” to the character. If you had her come from GB in the first place, it would fit. Editing is also our friend.
— Feb 19, 2026 04:57PM
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