Oh, God, I'm already done with this writing. I get it she has seven freckles.
After the lines describing her father as "most at home inside his workshop" and being in a cart with "a pile of woodwares," I didn't also need to be told "He is a woodworker, her father."
On this one page there are FIVE whole sentences letting you know this is the first time she's left her home. Ffs
— May 05, 2026 08:12PM
Add a comment