I really should stop reading this book bc the characters are the most 2D that I’ve read in a while. And yet I have 160 pages left and do want to see whatever ball the author is hiding abt the protagonist. Where are his flaws tho? All of these characters are soooo flat. Written by a 5th grader imo. These are the kind of choppy sentences I wrote in middle school and thought were good. Harsh critique but true!
— Jul 20, 2026 08:48PM
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