This feels messy. As if, maybe the manuscript was far longer and edited down to be faster-paced. But, in doing so, the characters are confusing, the plot twists doubling back on themselves: this is the murderer, no wait, this is, no wait, the other one, no, the other.
Too many characters
Too much going on
I found myself not caring about literally any part of it. DNF’d at about 90%!
— Apr 10, 2026 07:38PM
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