I can usually overlook grammatical errors in self published books, but this is next level.
Using the wrong 'your', using past tense words in present tense, using long sentences that should be broken up OR commas in places that make no sense. When sentence structure is bad my brain stutters and has to go back to figure out what it should say. That is TERRIBLE writing. It's making me dislike the whole story
— Jun 30, 2026 12:47PM
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