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also "thick blond hair whipped around her perfect oval face. intelligent, delicate beauty."

A little uncomfortable about female descriptions. ".. tilted her head with a look both shy and flirtatious before offering a hand with nails painted bright fuchsia. 50, attractive, and voluptuous in a tight sweater. Throaty whisper."

Moved to the DNF pile, 2021. There are simply too many implausible events for me to suspend my disbelief -- PD investigating underage students with no legal representation? teachers discussing theories with students under suspicion? idk. some of the dialogue/thoughts are too immature. why can't divorced people be friends? also a few misogynistic comments about women and the dead.

Moved to the DNF pile, 2021. There are simply too many implausible events for me to suspend my disbelief -- PD investigating underage students with no legal representation? teachers discussing theories with students under suspicion? idk. some of the dialogue/thoughts are too immature. why can't divorced people be friends?

Repetitive language - it fees overwrought, especially the hospital scene. Like “she wailed, horrified.” Do you need both? “cried, without really wanting to know.” It goes on.