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Admiral for admirable..

Already found two typos

Heroine raped in the past, is lusted over by most who look at her and knows it because she is empathic, is kidnapped with threat of rape, is lusted over by her rescuer (but grudgingly) oh boy the soonest to leave passenger ship is a BDSM fest...and they have to share a room.

"What that today?"
I have no idea how to interpret this sentence. Hopefully this is the only occurrence.

Giving up on this juvenile, convenient things happening, woman subjugating mess.

dragging. tempted to not finish

steamy apparently means spanking and anal...

Read Bec McMaster's Mission Improper. so far, so good!

Fast paced with a heroine one step behind in her life but trying to make it work.

One chapter in and I understand the negative reviews. Odd sentences that I had to reread to figure out, if I did at all. A whole paragraph was italicized including thought and action so it made no sense for it to be. It's too late for me to start a series that needs an editor.