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Part 4 chapter 9. This is a vwey good chapter when Paul tells his plan.

Too long. Too many information dump. Not a easy book to read.

Chap 29, this plot is not interesting, especially these two chapters. Too sudden and unnatural.

Now on chap 17. So far the writing is not natural. There is nothing feeling good about the main character.

So far nothing happens. The story is static and not moving ahead.