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What I don't understand why she is randomly giving away Massive amount of information to rando people. Just because they are an authority when she is walking into a human civil war???

I'm about 4Hr in and so much f'n progression. Talented writer world building wise. But too much progression not enough rooting. Must root your fantasy you can't blow things up or put people in danger if the reader isn't taught to care about them in some way. The MC doesn't make sense because not a lot of backstory. It's like she's rushing through gearing and dunno just bit much.

guys like if he ask me to suck him off I would LOL im dying here. Im like god. I laugh so hard I had to pee.

man this is a tough read. It's like the guy who is reading the audiobook is biting each word so hard it's a lot to listen to.

How f'n unlikeable with such low word count. The reader sounds like a biz bro. He speaking like he smokes 6 packs a day and not the good kind. Just eating words like nails. He doesn't draw in it repluses. There's better guy sexy voices. Just wildly unlikeable. Worst yet it's in first person male MC and the guy isn't really enjoyable. This is enemy to loves I think. I hope this turns the corner

As he builds his party. And more people show up it really makes me want to actually read this instead of just powering through with slight disgust. I can't stand the MC. It's not hot trash but it's more like a low level yuck guy.

A bunny showed up and I'm sold. I'm a cheap date as a reader if there's an animal companion

Bruh. He's not likeable. Don't speechify during an emgercy. There's these little moments that are just sucky for this guy if you stop and think about it. What is basically a solo, act or don't act and stick with it. Don't speechify. Seconds counts. And that's the problem I'm having with this series right now. He does his little "speech' instead of just doing what he agreed to. Which funmentally waste time. Annoying

omg the speechifying stop plz LOL. the book is so well excuted but sometimes the speeching just gets so draggy

dear god the mooning over a boy is so dumb. this isn't a breadcrumb romance this is french loaf being bash over the head of the reader.

the level of unserious of about her own survival is NUTS. like 28 hours later and shes still the white girl in the horror movie. Unlike before she believes it. Finally she gets what she is but does "bare min" change. She's also mean to the bone guy for no good reason and it's crappy. Judge people not for how they treat the strong but by how they treat the weak.

She never sells the reason why she should go back home. Ya, see friends and say bye. Great, but at least SELL US the homeworld. As if she has something besides mom and dad to go back to.

too much screaming and throwing up. this chick goes out of her way to not think, not plan and not survive.

also.... STOP SCREAMING. why are you screaming? Do you know that it's basically like a dinner plate in the fantasy world. And your on the menu?

the mc is kinda dumb. She does nearly everything in her power to die in the start zone. in the tutorial mode. There's very survial basics if you are a gamer you know. Food, water, med kit (or create one), ablity to carry things. So on but this chick has gone out of her way to not do logic. It's like shes speed running fail. I think the author is trying to show shes an every person. But she's not shes a gamer.

the girl is kinda dumb to be honest. she's not thinking about things very well. Ya, she's panicking but the unbrightness is kinda creepy. I'd dnf this if it didn't have some really great reviews. Really well written just not a character mesh. Also, the diary type entries doesn't make sense if you are in third person.

finally pushing main plot. Not awful

now it feels like name char piling without using toys. Just dump another one dump another one no main plot kinda meh slice of life. Cos no nutshelll on all the sisters and brothers just a lot of here's one more and look what they do. Only good part was prolly the baby of the group having an honest teen moment

to be honest she's a bit too perfect blood asides i don't get what she loves other then her family. Does she enjoy fighting or hating and doing it for her family .. I get the feeling its all she knows which is fine but boring. Like no reaction to its beauty or cleverness. Male lead sorta sucks so far as well. There's this 20 pages to sell him to me but he broke the rules in a rat face way right

This starts off a little to Ilona Andrews meets Nalini Singh in a .. I read this book way. Even though I haven't read this book yet.

What's even more weird is the scene is dead on guildhunters first book almost. Just tripping right now. SAME READER too. I had to stop the audiobook and double check that I wasn't having some sort of error.

This chick reads like the white girl in the horror movies that gets everyone killed. The ones who choose to do nonlogical things instead of realizing hey. I'm in a horror movie. I need to persevere my life. I need to survive and get into survival mode. I need to make a plan and do a bunch of logical things in a row. Instead, she hears a knock at the door and opens the door to the slasher.

So far, not bad.. we run across a few black characters and a few other things.

Dear God,

Please! Let me find 3 new talent storyteller style UF authors. Who actually have interesting ideas and multicultural storylines. PLZ GOD! I'm in a book drought.

Living in Sin,
Miss OP

fighting my way through this book. it's just.......... I've rarely been so unhappy about a start. it's disorganized. Not in that way where they tell a small short story that relates to the bigger at the start in just a... messy way.

The troupe is so dang stale. But damn RK Lilley is a talent bitch. I'm not in love with the book but if I could describe how this troupe is laying out. It's like the woman is writing the FUCK outta this. She is working the hell out of this writing pole. I am so impressed. like Whoooooooa.

The voice sounds like a 60 year old shrill white woman I can't deal witht his voice actor. when you have this sexy voice narrator at the same time it's like WHY ISNT SHE THE ONE AS HER VOICE omg

A big problem is how shrill the speaker for Yu is. It's hard to listen to for long periods of time. They should have had the main narrator be Yu or just use the same damn voice. It's really hard to listen to. I'm a little shocked how turned off I am to the voice. errr. not gonna say more about it