Mistress OP’s Reviews > Hunting and Herbalism: A Druid LitRPG > Status Update

I'm about 4Hr in and so much f'n progression. Talented writer world building wise. But too much progression not enough rooting. Must root your fantasy you can't blow things up or put people in danger if the reader isn't taught to care about them in some way. The MC doesn't make sense because not a lot of backstory. It's like she's rushing through gearing and dunno just bit much.