DNF at 44%
The premise had promise, but the execution didn’t work for me. The prose felt clunky and underdeveloped, the characters flat and unlikable, and the female characters were especially poorly written. I gave it a fair shot, but the writing grated more than it engaged me. At this point, I don’t think it will improve, and my time is better spent elsewhere.
— Aug 21, 2025 01:30PM
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