The writing style is really strange; not sure if the swear words are meant to be funny, but it gives it a dude-bro style that makes it really weird, not interesting/entertaining. I also hope that the narrator becomes more involved in the story. I'm willing to see what happens, but atp, I'm not hopeful I'll like it (or rate it above a 2)...
— 17 hours, 2 min ago
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