Sections with paragraphs and no numbers have flow, the rest doesn't feel like a novel. Alice is a whiny prude, who doesn't work on fixing good things, but voluntarily engages in thoughts that have huge potential to lead astray. I've been there and you need a clean break, no contact, yet she keeps engaging. The explanations and excuses don't interest me, because she knows very well what's at stake.
— Apr 23, 2017 03:29PM
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