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Aglaea
is 66% done
Sections with paragraphs and no numbers have flow, the rest doesn't feel like a novel. Alice is a whiny prude, who doesn't work on fixing good things, but voluntarily engages in thoughts that have huge potential to lead astray. I've been there and you need a clean break, no contact, yet she keeps engaging. The explanations and excuses don't interest me, because she knows very well what's at stake.
— Apr 23, 2017 03:29PM
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Aglaea
is 25% done
I have a strong suspicion I know the plot from beginning to end. Oh my god the cutesy and the scattered thoughts and I need eye bleach, this is so boring. I really don't want to be inside this mind because I'm having Bridget Jones flashbacks without the godawful stupidity of hers. And I hate BJ. Simply cannot stand the woman. For the love of god, just focus. On something, anything! *screams into pillow* DNF? Ugh.
— Nov 27, 2016 02:53PM
