Getting creeped out already 🙀. Now the writing ✍️ style throws me at times, Sometimes having to re-read sentences or read them out loud. The author does add some human traits to make characters less flat, but I would like a bit more into what is going on in the characters mind, how she’s feeling in these moments. It’s here and there. Some of her is described in a matter of fact way.
— Sep 29, 2021 10:14AM
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