I'm excited to read another Kresley Cole book... But I've stumbled across a few editing moments. Since when do you have conversational quotes that don't start a new paragraph with the next speaker's thoughts?
Person #1: "blah, blah, blah."
Person #2: "blah, blah, blah."
(Not) Person #1: "blah, blah, blah" (person #2) "blah, blah, blah".
Very confusing.
— Apr 19, 2024 08:02PM
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