The writing is very telly, and feels repetitive. The first chapter almost made me DNF it, since it just goes on and on about the repression of women.
We get it, they weren’t allowed a lot of this, but we don’t need 10 pages about it. This could have been shortened by 70% and it wouldn’t influence the story at all.
— Apr 16, 2026 10:40PM
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