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I’m 50% into the story and wow this is a disaster no plot no character development every chapter is repetitive to the same words same lines . I will refrain from adding more until I’m done but so far this will be a zero..

What a disaster the writing is atrocious. Is it a romance mafia book 📖 or a lesson on Italian bad food and fake history?

I’m seriously out of words and I’m only at 36% into the book. I have one thing very clear and that is that Hunter is every woman’s dream man.

I’m at 60% and all I can think is who in their right mind publishes a book with so many autobiographical errors. The typos are massive some even hard to place together with repeated the he we on after the other in the same sentence like what? A HUGE issue is the writing how the author cuts the scene and then turns to the next day after with no conclusion to the still ongoing scene. It’s a mess.

I just don’t understand why these authors do this. Such a good possible story only to make no sense and the heroine either being bipolar or just a very stupid one. Either she’s super meek or has the mouth of a sailor it’s like two different people. Giving her a sailor mouth doesn’t give her a strong character but more like guetto with no class and honestly so far her character sucks..

I was so excited to read this book unfortunately it is not anything of what was expected or even hinted at. It’s written horribly the story is a disaster of mass proportions. I don’t want to say more because I want to be good 2024 some people get offended with bad reviews others understand why reviews honest ones are important.

I will say I’m struggling to finish ..

So far it seems I’m reading a book with middle school teens absolutely disastrous so far.

This book is meh doesn’t offer much other than playing at catching like very unrealistic expectations. I tried to finish the book unfortunately it was just not good massive disappointment heroin is all about pros and cons and hero is a massive moron.. no connection it was bad bad badddddd..

I just don’t understand who writes a mafia book without any mafia content and the main character being Luca sounding like a teen from the valley meaning California valley. This writing and storyline is disastrous. I feel more and more authors and just writing to write without any regards to true professional writing. I will finish the book but this is a disastrous book.

Unfortunately more and more Stories are completely and utterly trash. As an avid reader I see more and more how stories are being published with absolutely no care for the reader.

This book gets a 0 zero from the first page it was cringe worthy.

The president tells the heroine who is 25 years old with a 10 year old daughter and a bank account to rival his yet she’s a prostitute and continues to be.

Wow!! Did a teen write this book? I’m literally on my way to giving up. The president is presented more like a middle schooler and the heroin is no different.

Will give it another try hoping this author miraculously wakes up at some point and redeems herself because so far this is junk galore..