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Needs editing
Spelling, incorrect scene details etc

Solid story
Interesting cast

Holy cheese on a cracker 😳
No flipping way!!! So like one of the biggest OMG I never saw that coming I've ever read just happened. And if it had happened differently ewwwww .. just wow I'm sort of reeling here.

I am having a hard time with Ainsley. Her behavior and attitude is beyond infantile. Casper really hasn't done anything to deserve it. I'm truly hoping she grows up in the next couple chapters. I also would enjoy hearing Casper's thoughts.

"I won't let you darken your soul"
I'm addicted!!!!

I grabbed this in Kobo plus
Great Potential- shifters, good vs evil, vampires, warlocks, angels etc
the story idea is intriguing-
The characters are a mix
It's a new author for me so I'm giving it a few chapters to acclimate to the writing style. It's a bit detailed but it is first in series so....

I don't want to go 😭

I'm pushing myself at this point - Mia is not innocent to the ways of the world as far as I'm concerned she's just plain rude, uncouth and highly unlikable. I'm hoping things click soon and we get some depth to the characters and a few bread crumbs regarding the story

Soren is a chit!
Brendis your heart may want him but you can do better

ADORKABLE ---OMG... I LOVE IT

Last time we ventured into the land beyond we were surrounded by Orcs on a bus
Now?
We we face Orcs on a boat tugged by tentacles
I'll be back after we cross the sea 🌊 😉

I started with an ARC then switched to KU hoping the errors (ie..defecated instead of defected) had been corrected. Sadly 😥 no
The story so far is hellaciosly solid but hard to read with all grammatical errors. just curious why not properly edit 😕

Matt #3 omfg I'm dying 🤣🤣🤣🤣

I'm so torn. I find it interesting that our characters are not the typical werewolves they are a blend of old lore and well im not really sure. Sam's a blast I like his easy going personality. Grant is a touch of poor me when it comes to his were side.

What's up with saying Jacob Cole? It's a bit annoying.

Im usually okay when an author stretches reality a touch in the name of a solid storyline. Here however I am having a problem. First with a Harvard educated woman not finding work - next with the brother not being harassed for the money , or dad giving more money to said mia son and now let's reminisce on our cheating ex that we didn't tell we knew he was cheating but instead dragged him with us to relocate???

Mixed feelings
Not impressed with the male lead

Matt with that negative attitude and quick placed judgement I think you need to spend some time in the stables
Isabel I know you are supposed to be weak kneed and light of thought but find your spine!
Carry on...

Holy Chit!!!
Now to chap.2

I tried. I just couldn't connect with the characters. the final straw was the scene that so resembled another popular vampire romance.

This is a new author for me and I am having a bit of trouble adjusting to her writing style. Who breaks into someone's home then wonders if their curtains billow in the summer breeze. ? I know im being picky ...

No matter how old you get or how "experienced" you are true love will always be a bit like learning to walk
You are bound to lose your balance , stumble, even feel frustrated on occasion.
But eventually after a while it becomes second nature
Oh you will stumble on occasion but you know there will always be someone there to help you up 💜

F CKNG EPIC!

Is it possible for the captor to develop Stockholm syndrome? Or is it just the prey becomeimg the captor?

The story almost has a dream like feel to it
Some of the scenes are so vivid others feel raw barley tangible
Love 💘the main characters

I'm having a hard time connecting with the cast. Many of the scenes , for me, are just overly detailed feels a bit unnecessary.

I'm stepping back for a bit
Jo you are an insecure whiny bch!

Holy chit

I am trying so hard not to peek at the end - not to read reviews that will ease this anxiety - I am afraid of what lies beyond the tunnels. Afraid of the men who offer sanctuary.