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Her characterization is all over the place. At this point can't believe this woman to a be a disciplined professional bodybody guard.

It's very repetitive and has a lot of unnecessary prose. The repetitiveness of the work made feel annoyed with the character instead of empathising with her. Her characterization also isn't as solid so i don't get a sense of her as person since the author tells more than shows how she's like.

Currently on pg57 and the plot is quite obvious but i still haven't got a clue about the man on the porch

My how theory was confirmed. The who is starting to look solid the why is kinda vague

I'm pretty sure of my how theory. The who and why is more complicated.

oh god. this is soooooo draging

I wanted to be 100% done with this so long ago