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Her characterization is all over the place. At this point can't believe this woman to a be a disciplined professional bodybody guard.
— Jul 05, 2024 02:24AM
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Ymm3
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It's very repetitive and has a lot of unnecessary prose. The repetitiveness of the work made feel annoyed with the character instead of empathising with her. Her characterization also isn't as solid so i don't get a sense of her as person since the author tells more than shows how she's like.
— Jul 05, 2024 02:08AM
