This is absolutely terrible so far. What the heck happened?!? The character development from book two is gone, Sadie's acting like an idiot, the guys can't communicate to save their lives, and Jax just doesn't care his two sisters are still in the other realm???? Also, biggest issue for me is the terrible male omega depiction. I've read newbie fanfic that's done it better. Ugh. I'm finishing this out, but it hurts.
— Aug 05, 2025 08:58PM
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