Michelle Monroe > Recent Status Updates

She said she’d met Harley at 16, he gave her a nickname. Then, The very next chapter she says 17 and now she’s a senior. I think we skipped some info 😆
Isn’t the first time it seemed age was off from previous chapter.
14/15 with the skinhead lol

Tonight we’re going to enjoy the hear and now and the luxury of privacy that it offers.

*HERE not hear
Sigh.

All four of them since they are coming at us from different Angels.

*angles not angels.
I find this particularly funny because my email has angels and my husband always spells angles which means I don’t ever get the emails 😂

I decide to the rattle the BLOCKED a bit more.

*the word ‘the’ should be omitted

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“You were not even upset by the fact that I may have ...BLOCKED FOR POSSIBLE SPOILER... to Xandra in this reality.”

*it’s supposed to be Xenia, not Xandra.

This is why I suggested a good proofreader in previous review. 🙂

Or, at least, slow it done.

*Should be down, not done.

“Him?”  I thought the one in the cage was a ‘him.’  Are the Pixies as gender neutral as the Sasquatch?

**shes questioning its gender and then a few paragraphs later she determines it’s a she? This whole time they thought it a he. 🤔

The Pixie puffs up her chest.  “I can’t help it if the rest of my race are ignorant jackasses,” she croons.

..but perhaps the fact that Felix still has a paw over the BLANKS face keeps it from BLANK.  I am excited until Kallen says, “My love, I do not believe a magical cage can hold these creatures.  It is eying your cage like it is a BLANK.”

** if it’s face is covered...how it eyeing her cage?? 🤔

(BLANK is blocking something that *may be spoilery)

What I hear is, “We have important things to discuss so get your wanker hands off her before I gnaw your fingers into nubs and use the remnants to stuff your mouth and nose so you can’t speak or breath.”

**breathe

-Isla turns to Kallen.  “Call Kegan and Adriel back.  They can be added to the roster.  Alita may not be able to exorcise them, but her eyes will be enough help.” 

Pretty sure it’s supposed to be “Call Kegan and ALITA back... not Kegan and ADRIEL since Adriel is there with them already.

“They’re not hear because of you.  They’re hear because of Mom and Dad.”

*here not hear x 2

What, exactly, is a teardrop shaped eye? Is the entire eye shape like a tear drop? 🤔 I’ve never heard eyes described this way. That doesn’t sound attractive.
I’m curious as to how exactly the author “sees” these eyes. No pun intended 😂

*She had clear cornflower-blue eyes, the same teardrop shape as Cyclone.

Chapter 6
I don’t get why authors feel 3 year olds can’t talk properly. Why on earth is the is little girl calling her dad “da-da”? Making it seem like she can’t enunciate words, like she just started talking 🙄. Makes no sense to me. This is going to irritate me the entire book if this continues.

I’m really starting to question why I’m still reading this. 😒

Ugh!! Tara!!! I kinda hate you right now!

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Kinda expected this, but still.... 😱

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Am breaks my heart 💔

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Choo Choo! OMG, IM DYING! This book is freaking hilarious. I always expect my side to hurt when reading a Meghan Quinn book, and she so has not disappointed. Racer is funny as hell! So is Georgie! Love these two!!

I'm really enjoying this story! Vaughn is a spunky sassy little thing and I just adore her!

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OMG! Y'all!!
I knew this book was gonna wreck me! Was up till 2 am reading, then my heart made me go to bed. And now I'm here like.. 😭😭