Michelle Monroe’s Reviews > Demon Blood > Status Update

I decide to the rattle the BLOCKED a bit more.

*the word ‘the’ should be omitted

“You were not even upset by the fact that I may have ...BLOCKED FOR POSSIBLE SPOILER... to Xandra in this reality.”

*it’s supposed to be Xenia, not Xandra.

This is why I suggested a good proofreader in previous review. 🙂

Or, at least, slow it done.

*Should be down, not done.