So far I'm about 50 pages in. I like the premise of the story, but theres a lot of problems already.
1. Purple and blue to differentiate the twins. I've legit read this in another reverse harem story. Idk if someone ripped off the other or if it's a coincidence, but its weird.
2. The names of the islands, while the MC does make a joke about it, are just lazy.
3. This book needed at least 2 more editors 😞
— Mar 28, 2020 06:18AM
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