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Idk. not really feeling this story. I'm bored and disheartened this early on, so just going to stop.

Idk. not really feeling this story.

Today is Opening Day for baseball fans everywhere!! Go Red Sox!!

Kinda disappointed at how dull this story is. Definitely in the sickly sweet age gap trope. Pretty descriptions but repetitive in-head thoughts are dragging it down for me.

Got a couple of chapters in and gave up.

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Too bad it's not proofread. A lot of missing end punctuation. missing words, or this gem: taught when it should be taut.

Then there's Ty's name... Jenkins. His dad is from Kenya, no way would he be named Jenkins. This was a ridiculous mistake that nobody?? caught! Ugh. And Ty talks a nice game, but his inner dialogue is street. Doesn't make sense to me at all.

Having some significant issues with the writing here. What I used to love about his author's style has become mediocre. First I almost stopped not even 10% in due to the various editing errors (missing words, missing punctuation).

Not liking this second book in the series as much as the first one. And, my God, the screaming! Seriously, no beta caught the screaming during sex, the screaming on the beach, the screaming from the rooftops. Blah.

I'm pretty bored and I feel like stuff got skipped over and there's lots of repetition.

This story is pulling a cowboy... moseying along. Sheesh.

Internal monologue... shoot me now.

Seriously the continuity issues are killing me. First, Kitshi doesnt have any money left yet he went and bought breakfast. Secondly, Toby storms out and tears his shirt off, but pages later Kitshi is tearing off the shirt he shouldn't even have on... sigh...

I picked this up during a free read giveaway and... Okay, so totally did not realize this was omegaverse!! All of a sudden there is knotting and no prep and I'm like WHAT!!?? Seriously, you couldn't have somehow snuck that in there in the early goings of the book?

Somebody didn't visualize through these sex scenes...

A lot of minor errors and odd phrasing. I was thrown into the world without any world building. I just found out the main character, Matthew has long hair. It's too weird to not have had any description of what he looks like before this.

Ugh. So not as good as books one and two. This, unfortunately, reads like an outline and leaves all the feels somewhere else, but not on the page where I needed them. Sean is too bratty, too submissive, to eat to give in. Totally get that he needs direction, just not seeing how the discipline of pony play is working towards that. Blake is seriously flat and I'm bored with his character.

Way to act like an adult! I almost thinking, okay this is getting slightly better, when BAM! Bryan throws a hissy fit a sixteen year old girl would be envious of.

I keep picking up Morticia's books in the Hope's that I'll like them. I really must stop this practice. At 25% I'm feeling like this is more PWP, although there is plot, it's just lost in all the flirting and not so sexy times (who starts a straight guy off with rimming??!!). Stilted dialogue and odd body placements abound.

Some seriously messed up POV shifts going on here

And why can't the man speak in conjunctions? This is America, darn it. I'll and I'm please.

I'd be loving this book more if everything that comes out of Seth's mouth didn't make him sound like a conceited ass.

Playful banter on bed is always a favorite of mine.

The dedication... just saying.

For the high ratings, I thought the writing would be better than a teenager's, but will keep going and hope for the best.