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But even as Nick spoke, Crawford shoved the barrel of his own automatic in his mouth and pulled the trigger,

Nick's really bad at this detective thing. He may want to take some classes

“Do it,” Barry said. “Whatever it takes. Roxy—she’s a part of our family.”

Could call Rosalie to see if she has a magic elixir in her shop

Hank fired the last of his clip as a troll rushed toward Nick.

Magazine

opened his scaly lips, exposing a red maw that suddenly exuded small licking flames and smoke—Monroe threw himself aside just in time to avoid the blast of flame.

That's not how the daemonfluer fire works

AR15 along with him. He aimed the assault weapon across

"Assault weapon" isn't a thing

scoop up the sentry’s AR15. He readied the semi-auto assault rifle

Ar15 isn't an assault rifle

AR15 assault rifle.

Ar15 isn't an assault rifle.

“I don’t know why you think you need to go to university,” an exasperated voice said from behind her. “You’re just wasting good money.”

She's not wrong

Jane stepped back and looked up at him. “What about the other demons, Gral’gor? Veralaktus and the other Hellguards. Did they survive?”

How are they having this conversation with two jet engines running inside a shack?

“She was a Marine,” he said with a proud grin. “And a certified, grade-A badass—if you’ll pardon my French.”

Lol. Bullshit. That's the least believable part of this whole series

“So this is it,” Bo said. “This is your last trip or bust. Literally.”

Except for the highly advanced energy charger Tobias is carrying. Why you haven't plugged that sucker in yet, I don't know

Bo rubbed his chin in thought for a moment.

Why is this such a puzzle. Lisa can tell you exactly what's going on above you. That was the whole point of dropping those disks on the way down. Elle should have plenty of power now that they grabbed the solar recharger demo from the miners

The giant took a careful step forward, then another.

Did the author forget Elle can turn invisible?

That one broke from the group and dashed for the nearest door. A burst of black and purple light split through his shield and sliced open his back, spilling copious amounts of blood.

That sounds way too flashy. I was expecting her to have nano-whips installed in her fingertips. That's going to be way more covert than literal flashbulb bright micro-lightsabers or whatever the hell she's using

Men clutching rifles ran out, screaming.

This hologram is so realistic!

Some looked like they had been dragged here after being shot. Trails of red streaked across the floor,

The drag marks are only in the room? The butchers were nice enough to mop all the dragged blood trails from the rest of the station so no one noticed they led to this room?

“Based on the archive you provided us, the border raids had already stopped when the High Praxis Drexan Vhol went off the rails in such a public manner.

You can't protect your citizens by *hoping* that the enemy has stopped trying to kill you

What you have described and what your archive shows is a travesty of justice.

Protecting your sovereign borders is a travesty?