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So far it's fine wnd well written but there are soooooo many small Continuity errors that it takes me out of the story. Could really use a good proofreader and final editing round.

This book would really benefit from editing. For example the main character refers to someone called "Og" while we have no idea who that is because Og doesn't introduce himself till 2 pages later.

She is also asked to decorate for a wedding because she is so stylish. She has been there for less than 24 hours and walked through a snowstorm in a velvet cloak and dress. I can't imagine she looked very stylish.