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This book would really benefit from editing. For example the main character refers to someone called "Og" while we have no idea who that is because Og doesn't introduce himself till 2 pages later.
She is also asked to decorate for a wedding because she is so stylish. She has been there for less than 24 hours and walked through a snowstorm in a velvet cloak and dress. I can't imagine she looked very stylish.
— Apr 05, 2026 01:12PM
She is also asked to decorate for a wedding because she is so stylish. She has been there for less than 24 hours and walked through a snowstorm in a velvet cloak and dress. I can't imagine she looked very stylish.
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Apr 10, 2026 07:12AM
To be fair, we speak about people that the other has never met, without explanation sometimes
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You don't mention my cousins name which you've never heard though
What I'm trying to say, there was no way the character knew the name. But she said it 2 pages before it was revealed. It's an actual error, not opinion
Oooh, that was the way it read. You said 'We have no idea', not that the character would have no idea.. so yeah, we're not clairvoyant, just chaotic
