Holy shit what a chaotic read. Unclear MC, timelines are all over the place, the relationships are all over the place. The constant “the expecting mother” or “the future father” rather than just names.
It requires so much brainpower. It’s clear the author loves to go on side quests when describing a scene. Idk how i’m going to get through this
— Jan 26, 2026 12:02PM
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