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Enjoying and well done, if not groundbreaking


Although, so far the author has mispronounced both “pesach” and “haman” in the audiobook. Like brutally butchered the pronunciation.

I like this book so far but if I DNF it’s because I keep leaving notes in the margin about clunky paragraph level writing.

Some unclear antecedents, double negatives, out of order clauses and repetitive sentence structures pull me out far too often.