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Richman arrested in Singapore and facing drug related death sentence is great. Topper on good book

You know, Crichton also has quite a good Sanderlanche

Finally she has to be TOLD that Marder screwed her? She should have already known

The frustration of asshole characters and bad circumstances is by design but UGH it feels so mean and wrong.

Ok, now we know it’s not the right pilot

I know things are urgent, but she’s still acting like it’s a problem without an author and they should have changed by now. Just spinning plates for a bit

Uh. Girl . That pilot you met ain’t Cheng!

Jennifer the producer is definitely the older producer lady in Nightcrawler

Not every paper or reporting is salacious and personal, or looking for guilt. Good to at least separate print from tv, but no focus on cable vs local tv or local vs national maybe a miss.

Ok, now I see. Repeating first and last names really helps identify characters. Also giving them distinct actions to do that only they would do.

Ohhh, bad guys are the unions? Well there’s always another layer of problems (Nedry>fence failure)

"Emotionally, they're all thirteen years old, stuck at the age just before boys stop playing with toys, because they've discovered girls. They're all still playing with toys. They have poor social skills, dress badly-but they're extremely intelligent and well trained, and they are very arrogant in their way. Outsiders are definitely not allowed to play."

90s gangs were maybe really this bad? Dunno why multiple languages bad

Why does she blame the child of a human sacrifice who is helping her for 2000 years of oppression? It would be like blaming her for her own actions, very odd and just throw away.

Don’t need a recap!!! Omg, just get on with it

Finally some interesting duplicity

Finally! An interesting double cross, also need more hints of Gods interference, Yizhi needs to be cornered and confronted. So little book left for fun stuff tho