Up until now this has been BRILLIANT, but why all the short chapters? I mean, why do we have a character stop talking mid sentence only to continue that sentence in the very next chapter?. It seems like we are being forced into this illusion that this book is a page turner. I don't think it needs that at all. It's good enough to be allowed to just flow..
— Nov 20, 2025 01:40AM
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