I really like this story so far, but the FMC seems to, unprovoked, get up on her high horse a little too much for my taste. Like this scene right now, them getting ready to travel to Boise. She’s unnecessarily snippy and takes offense at the most innocent comments. Maybe I’m too early in my judgement; but if I was Anthony, I’d be out of there.
— Dec 17, 2025 01:42PM
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