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It’s fine, but I’m not really into the story.

She explains everything, giving the reader no credit for being intelligent enough to draw the conclusions themself.

I want to be specific in what I’m not liking. I’ve read so many books and am realizing that even if I don’t love a story, the writing is good. For this, it’s neither. The sentences are short and choppy with no real flow for them. There are random one line stories that are irrelevant and don’t move any plot. At times the reader is spoken to right before going back to a 3rd or 4th perspective. It’s nuts.

I’m really not liking it.