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So far terrible
But

How does he know about the floors in the library

Not understanding the quasi mind reading without it being mind reading

Is a wyvern number 7?

Idk 20 bucks says cordyn is a traitor city

Madness from dragons following familial lines was mentioned earlier and no one cared but now that its mentioned again suddenly they do? What??

ITS PORE OVER NOT POUR OVER OMGGGGGG WHY DOES IT SEEM LIKE NO EDITING HAPPENED

I really dont understand how her torture session never comes up. Like she shows no ptsd or lingering issues from it when it really seems like she should. Its weird to have no mention of it or liam coming to visit her?? Just drama between women and her not reading the whole book which is so out of character

I also really hate that women are always pit against each other because of a man. I think its a sad trope to see such hate between two female characters on just that basis and not have it expanded past that much

Also tell me how there are 4 riders and 5 fliers but only 7 in the group when they get handed the papers?

Updates: plot feels very loose like cat being connected to her squad although leadership knows theres a dispute there, no one thinking large gaggle of dragons and griffins might draw attention of wyvern who have been multiple times mention as being seen near their location, the constant use of counting things in heart beats and the OVERLY AGGRESSIVE MAN OVER ANYONE INC FAM MUST OBEY HIM OR HE WOULD KILL OTHERS TROPE

I quite literally cannot believe she would fall for the drink thing again. After being offered poison on multiple occasions and being a so called poison expert herself why would she accept anything from anyone to consume?

How is smth triggering if they have nothing that requires a trigger?

What happens if one dragon dies. Does violet still die or is it okay bcz she has two?

If i was mira id be so annoyed like sister doesnt ever talk to me always boy always always always boy >:(

Why are any of them eating the food when it was tainted last time? Have one person test first at least?

Also if she knows shell be interrogated at rsc soon why isnt she trying to avoid sensitive information instead of icing people out for not giving it to her?

Also just minorly confused how no other riders have mentioned seeing venin if theyre in combat often?

The repetition of counting things in beartbeats, the use of subluxate, and the random flipping daggers over themselves is kinda driving me bananas. ALSO IN WHAT FANTASY UNIVERSE DO THEY HAVE UMBRELLAS??

Ill be honest im not getting why violets still angry ab secrets when the pt of classified intel has been brought up to her and xadens made the pt that shes keeping secrets too ?

Also why couldnt she use her powers in the fight since it wasnt sanctioned?

Im glad she didnt have xaden come in and finish him for her:D i am a little confused why theyre having cryptic conversations in the hallways though

Some really lovely and unique prose so far

It was 8 hours from bashiath to athebyne how can it be 12 back? Unless winds but still thats a significant time difference

I amend my last but i am wondering why they dont have alloy arrows? Daggers are much less effective at range and i know they have cross bolts and bows

Idk man i mean the most heavily guarded middle of the country base w hundreds of dragons being attacked w no warning almost seems more unrealistic to me than the fact there are dragons. Maybe itll be explained but rn idkkkk