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I hate Kim. I hate David. Owen is the spawn of satan.

-I already feel so sad about the way that they treated Rosalie. For some reason I expected her to be a spoiled little monster but she just seems like a sweet nine year old that wants love from her parents.
-Does every house in England back to a river?! I can’t count the number of British books I’ve read where the family’s house backs to a river and everyone thinks a missing child drowned there.

I think Jess might have been a baby that their dad had out of wedlock and their mom agreed to raise as her own but not-so-secretly hated for it. Also im still convinced that this whole mess is Jess and Ethan working together to get the inheritance.

If her sister paid Ethan to kill her so that she gets the whole inheritance I will be very disappointed

Margot Gray is an idiot
I feel like this author is being paid by CrossFit and Sierra Nevada brewing

Who’s watching their son when Luna goes out to follow her husband and confront him in weird situations? Who was watching her when her mom did that?
Writing errors.

I get the feeling that Alex isn’t a good guy. He saw his wife (who is 12 years his junior) and immediately thought “I want that” which strikes me as a little bit possessive. He also keeps saying “she would never do this to me” and I feel like this might be a case of a controlling partner/possible abuser thinking that his partner will never leave

This book seems a little long. I’m not even halfway through and it sure seems like we’re approaching the climax so I can’t imagine what more could happen for 54% percent of the book.

Repetitive

There have been a number of times when characters speak in the past tense when I don’t think they would. “Did Nolan have a computer?” He was alive ten minutes ago when he drove away, why are we speaking about him in the last tense. I also remover Lara speaking about how Ava loves her dolls in the past tense. As her mother shouldn’t you assume that she’s still alive?

Some notes so far
-this author is obviously a Christian because prayer is mentioned every other page. The main characters pray, the town holds prayer vigils, the town and school seem to be christian because they put in a big Christmas production and have the students make Christmas ornaments in the classroom
-I thought the author might be British because she has a strange way of wording things sometimes