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The pacing is slow in this one. Moments of interest but also moments of boredom. Don’t want to say it’s a slog, but there are moments… My weakest Ishiguro to date. Also not sure where it’s going or what I’m supposed to be taking from this yet. It has 60 pages left to stick the landing. Let’s see.

Harkness once again raised interesting stakes to start and once again they’ve vanished and I’ve no clue where it’s going now or what the point is. Why are we spending a whole chapter on wedding that, as far as I can see, serves not purpose to the plot. I blame Harkness but also her editor. Go back to the interesting stuff, not this filler.