I would once again like to know....where is the editor?
We had gems in chapter two the likes of:
"Isla jammed her hands into armpits..."
"She felt more alone than she had ever done in her life."
Also, the barista is a faceless, nameless man with a bun.
2007-2010 references: myspace, flip phone, clueless about boba (but then correctly calling it "bubble tea" in internal dialogue.
— May 25, 2025 11:51AM
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