I get it now. It is not the story, it is the writing. The story is actually quite good (entertaining and strangely even enlightening in parts). The writing however, goes from very good to just good to too much pomp. Simple activities that must just be stated in 4 words are described in such convoluted 4 paras, it is bizarre! Not to say it is bad, the writing is just jarring. It requires and steals too much focus away
— Aug 31, 2025 03:30AM
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