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If I wanted to read first drafts of papers , I seek out a job teaching college composition

What editor approved this writing ? Is this book self published ? Or maybe it’s written by an LLM?

Poor craftsmanship of writing; reads like a first draft. Very simple and simplistic. Great authors show, don’t tell ;he is just telling. Does he realize he’s writing the protagonist in a stereotype, or is she experiencing a distorted reality due to grief? It reads as former because he’s Telling , not Showing. Not optimistic it’ll resolve.
Not sure why this writer is being compared to other Greats.

Such a delightful read! A review I saw compared it to 'Time traveler's wife', and I'd agree but with more! ...more characters, more changes. Just at much diving into books and libraries, and characters sussing out a web of problems grounded in reality and metaphysical.