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So far, so good. But there are a few times that made me go "huh?"
"elastic sprawl" in describing American tourists
and
"She tried to teach me [the flute] but I hated how spit bubbled through the notes and had to be drained after each piece."

As an ex-flutist.... what? Is the author thinking of a trumpet? You don't need to drain a flute of spit. Condensation forms, but you don't hear it "bubbling." Very odd

Oh god... sub women are..... something else lol

oh god here we try again
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The amounting of growling this man does. I'm just picturing a Doberman every time

I'm so sick of female subs in romances.

reading this because I know it will be hilariously bad and boy it doesn't disappoint! already having a blast. Audiobook, of course. Listening to professional narrators read this crap is AMAZING.

I hate this, but since it was recommended to me, I'll keep going. But god is this repetitive and boring.

Interesting note about the title. The word "matrix" comes from the word, "womb" in Old English. You learn something new every day:

late Middle English (in the sense ‘womb’): from Latin, ‘breeding female’, later ‘womb’, from mater, matr- ‘mother’.

I get the narrative stylistic choice, but I don't like it.

How was this approved for publication? I've read better Wattpad stories and those usually don't have the luxury of an editor.