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Never finished .. was soooo very close .. like last year 😭🫰🏽

Paused this around May 3rd after I got inspired and full got into writing.

A bit slow set up… interesting potential but on pause for now

Well-written as Sarah J. Maas is no stranger to creating vivid worlds. But utterly boring when I really think of it. Not very stimulating, slow, only one really exciting scene and that lasted a mere few pages… maybe it gets better in the end. But for now, don’t want to waste my free time on hoping this is worth it.

Dragging and repetitive. Violet always seems to have a boulder in her throat, be on tip of nausea, or a shoulder or knee “subluxation.” Some parts just don’t make logical sense and the time jumps between paragraphs, of which I originally commended in the first book, are simply major plot holes for details and momentum craved. Too much time is spent on back and fourths with Xaden and characters have lost spark.