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Chapter 169

Chapter 100 - translation into english is very sketchy and makes it hard to read as editing in my head to make story more viable and connected to storyline. Much of the story is ok but my advice to author would be (if wants to make this work for english readers) not to trust auto translate or thesaurus or the references currently using and go with an language editor and this could be a much better experience.

A good read but expensive. Chasing the author per chapter now but sticking with it as well written.

Ingoing..

Currently at chapter 337… awaiting more.
I usually don’t read “per chapter” books in apps but i think this is a really good option.
2 ISSUES
1- unfinished and waiting is a pain!
2- become so very expensive and chapters are so short. It has cost a significant amount of money to get as far as i have into the yet unfinished book (ch337 cost £80! So far incl bonuses).

Currently at chapter 337… awaiting more.
The world/character building is phenomenal. Could EASILY, be a trilogy/series..so far. Characters from the start are complex. Multilayered mentally, physically and emotionally. Brings all characters to the story to deal with sexuality, emotional/physical manipulation, peer judgements/acceptance, relationships, physical/sexual abuse, stereotypes, religion, permission+