Yiv’s Reviews > Rejected by the Beta, Claimed by the Alpha > Status Update

Chapter 100 - translation into english is very sketchy and makes it hard to read as editing in my head to make story more viable and connected to storyline. Much of the story is ok but my advice to author would be (if wants to make this work for english readers) not to trust auto translate or thesaurus or the references currently using and go with an language editor and this could be a much better experience.