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I think I eye roll for most French inserts. It is not necessary and dare I say actually off-putting to french speakers.
I tried convincing myself that some weirdness is because of french Canadian which I do not master but I seriously doubt it... You can't just translate literally it does not work that way.
I think there probably was panic in my eye when Hunter said he started learning French, NO!

I had no choice but to give up on making sense of the characters. I'm just trying to enjoy smut which is good but would still be better if I could somehow relate with the MCs.
I'm kinda ready for it to be over...

OOC doesn't even describe this cake baking + apology scene, absolutely ridiculous
Shower scene was fun, could have been more detailed imo

I wanted to give dark romance a try. Without being a big fan of the Peter Pan story I always saw the potential of a good enemies to lover with Hook and Peter.

55% in, Hook seems very OOC from the depiction we had in the 1st chapters. He went from dark and cruel to possessive puppy. I feel like we are missing the tension and yearning and maybe even the rawness.

The switch from forget to remember seems a bit easy...