Cool descriptions, but a little too much... 3 consecutive pages of describing the surroundings on my iPhone's iBook, 1 line of the protagonist doing something then descriptions again. Gah! Aaaand, I don't think Kas is the nickname for Kasumi, since Japanese don't pronounce S alone, it's usually accompanied by a U. So it should either be Kasu (which is weird), or Sumi. Oh well! Guess I'm a little anal sometimes.
— Sep 15, 2013 10:36PM
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