Soooo tempted to not finish by my pride won' allow it... the unrealistic dialogue is grating to say the least, in particular the fact that there is an overuse of using each other's names when speaking.
Ex:) "Lyle I believe you..."
"They believe you, Lyle.."
"All of it matters, Lyle"
This isn't even all of them, but even half. Same conversation from the character occurring on one page. It's driving me crazy
— Jul 01, 2025 08:37PM
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