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"I contemplated my plans for the next day. I could rearrange the kitchen cupboards, maybe catch a matinee, slit my wrists. The possibilities were endless."

The long sentences with missing punctuation marks, such as commas and periods,are annoying.

The way the character tells the story, feels like a chick lit.

This started out like a chick lit. But it has a MALE POV.

Crappy

Reading this while reading-switching to The Coincidence of Callie and Kayden is quite redundant in a sense.

Still, the image haunted his dreams throughout the night: a lovely girl gazing at the stars, and the stars who gazed back.

The setting's college and they're twenty-somethings but it's like I'm reading a high school romance.

“Call the police!”
“What? Why?”“There’s a man masturbating in your bathroom!”