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NOPE

DNF

DNF

No thanks. DNF.

DNF

Trigger Warnings had me regretting my life.

Somebody should probably pray for my sinner soul.

Why so much detail. You could just say the clothes are black and ill fitting? Why these long descriptive paragraphs that fill up an entire page on mundane things?!

Also, I guess this book was written in a time of heightened societal issues. Just checking off the boxes.

I don’t like it so far. I don’t like time travel, I don’t like how much explanation goes into a simple thing. You can say a hallway is dark and damp without explaining the wall texture and the history and the lighting. I found myself saying “who cares?!” Out loud.. a lot.

So much information dump. Where is my action?!

I don’t understand how these books get so many good reviews. This writer just drags on and on. How many times are you going to say the same thing a different way?! And let’s just throw in some present day references here. Riding horses in our scratchy tunics listening to Five Finger Death Punch and reading Harry Potter. WTF.